Woozey the Writer

Thank you both so much for your reviews! :) I've been told about too much telling before, but nobody has ever actually bothered to explain to me the difference. I ...

Hi :) Thank you for you rcomment and taking the time to read my work. Yes, what happens to James is explained further on, Just wondering what you meant by ...

yes please...i need points for improvment! glad you liked it though. part 3 is in process! x

Hi. Your poem was good. Is it about a girl who was unknown and then went on to well for herself? Is it a true story? I like the way ...

Hi. Thankyou for all your comments! I will definately take them on board. As I'm carrying on the story can anyone think of any tiles for it? It would be ...

I have just noticed that I put When they got to the end of the path Not when she did, so please leave that out in your comments. Also, the ...

Hey. I like it, but ive already read it!!! Any new ones? Let me know... x

No! It's the exact same poem! What have you added? x

Wow! I'm new to this too and I'm a bit nervous and your poem was the first I read on this site. It was simply stunning. You make it so ...